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THe facial expressions on the main guy was great. This was one of the first times I've seen little anecdotes during action flashes amuse me at all. Seeing it from memes helps I guess.

The action was superb. Realistic movement and choreography. Really wasn't expecting him to be out of bullets lol. That was a great touch, especially with the wall box jump right after. Add faces to another character next time.

Ellvis responds:

Thanks a lot I like reviews like those :)

Lol that would have been an unrealll twist. I also watch the show, the humor was spot on. The funniest part was the beginning though

Loved it. The music and use of sound was superb. Very chill but technical with the FX. I love this kinda shit. I think a little torso might gone a long way though. Consider it if you make another one. Also, a couple things I thought woulda made it that little cream-in-my-pants-bit better. Have the sun rising or setting more visible and noticeable, not too noticeable obviously. And the dude was also static in the middle of the screen when cruising. A little swaying back and forth as if the stage/camera's not perfectly centered on him the whole time would be another cool subtle thing to make this better than it is. I thought your animation style was good though. Fluid. and more practice only gets smooother. Keep it up! :D

It really make you think

I mean, most of us dont think twice before using cut on an unsuspecting tree. Little do we know it has a family to provide for. Selfish.

Game sound effects contrasting the animated voice was very effective (funny juxtaposition). The shakey but still expression is also very LOLz along with crying piano music

MOAR and longer! Have silly and completely over the top childish voices of pokemon with gleaming baby seal eyes, then violence. Make the characters either really gay, really, intense(aWEsome), or really apathetic like you did here.

nICE Woork!!!!!

OnionsXD responds:

Hey thanks for the review and positive feedback!
I'll take your advice into consideration, however though I don't plan on making anymore pokemon cartoons. That is unless I come up with a extremely hilarious idea.

Oh hey Derb, what's up

I thought you really nailed what a sexually frustrated teen often wishes and worries about. "why the fuck am I talking to myself" said confidently and then angerly and insecurely in reality. Lol, greaat stuff. The dialogue in the reality part although cliche , it is appropriate generic conversation given the premise of the flash.
Your AW3SOME!!-esque animation style I think looks fine and will only improve over time. Characters talking with their hands was awesome and I think the stub-hands is a good staple (trademark) to keep for yourself. Also your animation style I thought fit the content well (angry/sloppy social critique). Funny Stuff!!

servandovill responds:

thanks alot! , very well comment of support , i wish to have more reviews like yours in my future submmitions

Very Stylish

Great use of music. I felt the cuts were somewhat rhythmically matched with the bars of the tune. Love that kind of stuff. I also liked the one shot in the sewage when they're fighting and you can only see their legs. Other cuts like those to the faces and boomerang really gave it a really cinematic and fluid feel. The only improvement I can think of is adding better sewage splash effects and adding more facial expressions in the close ups. Regularly I don't like to see faces on sticks but it works well here.

MOAR!!1

Awesome Epicness in 2011

The subtle sound effects and visual effects gave it that extra epic-ness: awesome diverse simple and focused. Like when he closes his eyes right before he stabs the last invisible guy that teleports behind him, loved that. I liked how suspenseful you made it for the first couple scenes too, so you could later blow us away with some unreal shield and shotty choreography. I'm not sure if this your best so I definitely need to go make sure I've seen all the BunnyKills

Bo Staff Fling FTW

Simply amazing. The choreography is phenomenal and the animation fluid as water. Best stick flash on newgrounds? Me sez: yes.

Epic Cartoon.

That was like the beginning of UP caliber... except funny and not depressing :D

Amaaay zing

That was like Madness, Viewtiful Joe and a hint of Dragon Ball Z all in one. Amazing work.

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